Nicole's,+Debbra's+&+Megan's+Page

This is Nicole's, Debbra's and Megan's page. toc

[] This is a website that has colours and their meaning. ~Debbra

So we need to make it rhyme? ~Megan

I guess so... ~Debbra

=A journey overseas=

__Draft__
A journey overseas is light yellow and olive green It tastes like an enormous stick of candyfloss It sounds like bells chiming out a happy melody It smells like … It looks like … It makes me feel like … ~Debbra

__Final__
A journey overseas is light yellow and olive green It tastes like an enormous stick of candyfloss It sounds like bells chiming out a happy melody It smells like the spiciness of curry chicken It looks like children enjoying a ride on a roller-coaster It makes me feel like shedding tears of joy

~ Megan

=Funfairs=

Funfairs are every colour of the colourful rainbow It tastes like the soft,melting pink cotton candy from the man in the yellow apron It sounds like shouts and cheers and carousel music It smells like the chips and snacks found everywhere It looks like the family of four queuing for the sausage roll It makes me feel like whooping in joy.

~ Debbra

=The Heat=

__Draft__
The heat comes every summer Bringing with it misery and Popsicles Misery, endless,relentless for three straight months Popsicles, cooling, calming, a balm

The heat comes every summer Full of children playing on their bicycles Injury, nevertheless for the young 'uns Who don't know how to ride a bicycle and need to be becalm ~Debbra

This should sound better:

__Final__
The heat comes every summer Bringing misery and popsicles Endless and relentless misery for three straight months Popsicles, cooling, calming, a balm

The heat comes every summer Full of children playing on their bicycles Injury, nevertheless for the young 'uns Clueless about bicycles and need to be becalmed

~Nicole

Yup. It does. Thanks! ~Debbra

Help me to edit it. it is HORRIBLE... especially the last and third paragraph. ~Debbra

=Dogs =

__Draft__
Dogs, the members of our household. Behold the sweet Golden Retriever, the smart German Shepard The fierce Chihuahua, the gentle Great Dane

Remember the fun you had, When you played with your beloved pet.

Remember the pride you felt, When your pooch managed to learn a new trick

Remember the loyalty to you, as one comes down the lane, and the barks at the strange old dame.

Remember the joy you felt, When your dog played with your child.